{"id":253,"date":"2022-04-26T16:18:28","date_gmt":"2022-04-26T20:18:28","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=253"},"modified":"2022-08-22T11:56:51","modified_gmt":"2022-08-22T15:56:51","slug":"6-2-emails","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/chapter\/6-2-emails\/","title":{"raw":"6.2 Emails","rendered":"6.2 Emails"},"content":{"raw":"Electronic mail, widely known as \u201cemail,\u201d is by volume the most popular written communication channel in the history of human civilization. With emails being so cheap and easy to send on desktop and laptop computers, as well as on mobile phones and tablets, a staggering 280<em>\u00a0billion<\/em>\u00a0emails are sent globally per\u00a0<em>day<\/em>\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">(Radicati, 2017)<\/a>\u2014that\u2019s over a hundred trillion per year. Most are for business purposes because email is such a flexible channel ideal for anything from short, routine information shares, requests, and responses the length of a text, to important formal messages delivering the content that letters and memos used to handle. Its ability to send a message to one person or as many people as you have addresses for, integrate with calendars for scheduling meetings and events, send document attachments, and send automatic replies makes it the most versatile communication channel in the workplace.\r\n\r\nThis mind-boggling quantity of 3.2 million emails sent per second doesn\u2019t necessarily mean that quality is a non-issue for email, however. Because it has, to some extent, replaced mailed letters for formal correspondence, emails related to important occasions such as applying for and maintaining employment must be impeccably well written. Your email represents you in your physical absence, as well as the company you work for if that\u2019s the case, so it must be both well-written and appropriate.\r\n\r\nFirst, ensure that you really need an email to represent you because emailing merely to avoid speaking in person or calling by phone can do more harm than good. If an email is necessary, however, then it must be <em>good<\/em>. As people who make decisions about your livelihood, the employers and clients you email can be highly judgmental about the quality of your writing. To them, it\u2019s an indication of your professionalism, attention to detail, education, and even intelligence. The writing quality in a single important email can be the difference between getting hired and getting fired or remaining unemployed.\r\n\r\nLet\u2019s say, for instance, that you get an email from a customer and they mention in it that they\u2019ve been shopping around for a company to do a custom job for them. This means they\u2019re emailing other companies with the same inquiry. Let\u2019s say also that your competitors offer similar services at similar prices and are similarly reviewed positively online. With everything else being equal, the quality of the email responses may be the deciding factor. Responding to the customer quickly gives you an advantage because you show them that you can get things done promptly. If your email is also well written in a professional style and error-free in every way due to effective editing and proofreading, you stand a much better chance of getting the job.\r\n\r\nComparing this with another company\u2019s email that came a few days later with multiple writing errors in it, the customer will likely go with the company that wrote the better email. Even though the quality of communication doesn\u2019t necessarily guarantee quality of work in the product or service a company provides, customers will assume a connection. Indeed, the quality of communication can certainly say volumes about work ethic and attention to detail. We must all try to make a similarly strong impression in any situation where the quality of email matters. Activity 6.1 demonstrates a standard email.\r\n<h3>[h5p id=\"15\"]<\/h3>\r\n<div id=\"slug-9-1-text-e-mail-and-netiquette\" class=\"chapter standard\">\r\n<div class=\"ugc chapter-ugc\">\r\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02\" class=\"section\">\r\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01\" class=\"section\">\r\n\r\n<sup>Activity 6.1 | Sample Standard Email<\/sup>\r\n<h3>Possible Email Structure<\/h3>\r\nActivity 6.2 is a guide you can use to write a standard email.\r\n<h3>[h5p id=\"20\"]<\/h3>\r\n<sup>Activity 6.2 | Email Structure<\/sup>\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s03\" class=\"section\">\r\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01\" class=\"section\">\r\n<h3 class=\"title editable block\">Tips for Effective Business Emails<\/h3>\r\nIf you're struggling to write an email, err on the side of not wasting the reader's time. Many readers get hundreds of emails a day. While a reader might sit down to read a letter or a memo, they will usually spend a few seconds scanning an email for relevant information before moving on to the next one. Unless your email is sensitive or you are breaking bad news, it's nearly always a good idea to state the main point of the email clearly and to clearly tell the audience what you want them to do. For an email, you should tell the reader why you are writing, provide supporting details, then tell the reader what to do.\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01\" class=\"section\">\r\n\r\nHere are some tips for sending successful emails:\r\n<ul id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01_l01\" class=\"itemizedlist editable block\">\r\n \t<li>Use appropriate salutations: Proper salutations should demonstrate respect and avoid mix-ups in case a message is accidentally sent to the wrong recipient. For example, use a salutation like \u201cDear Ms. X,\u201d (external) or \u201cHi, Barry,\u201d or \"Dear Barry,\" (internal).<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Make subject lines clear: Subject lines should be clear, brief, and specific. This helps the recipient understand the essence of the message. For example, \u201cProposal attached\u201d or \u201cYour question of 10\/25.\u201d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Be brief: Omit unnecessary words.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Use a clear format: Include line breaks between sentences or divide your message into brief paragraphs for ease of reading.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Have one clear purpose: If you find yourself covering more than one topic in your email, you should consider sending multiple emails so that your reader does not miss important information.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Test links: If you include a link, test it to make sure it works.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Announce attachments: If you include attachments, don't forget to mention them in your message.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Close with a signature: Identify yourself by creating a signature block that automatically contains your name and business contact information. It is becoming increasingly common for businesses to add First Nations Land Acknowledgements to their email signatures. It is important to find out from your organization if they use First Nations Land Acknowledgements and how to accurately include them in your signature.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Reread, revise, and review: Catch and correct spelling and grammar mistakes before you press \u201csend.\u201d It will take more time and effort to undo the problems caused by a hasty, poorly written email than to get it right the first time.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Reply promptly: Watch out for an emotional response\u2014never reply in anger\u2014but make a habit of replying to all emails within 24 hours, even if only to say that you will provide the requested information in 48 or 72 hours.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Use \u201cReply All\u201d sparingly: Do not send your reply to everyone who received the initial email unless your message absolutely needs to be read by the entire group.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\nBefore hitting the <em>send<\/em> button, revise and proofread your email. Put yourself in your reader\u2019s position and assess whether you\u2019ve achieved the purpose you set out to achieve in the first place. Evaluate also if you\u2019ve struck the appropriate tone and formality. After revising generally, <strong>always proofread<\/strong> an email. In any professional situation, but especially in important ones related to gaining and keeping employment, any typo or error related to spelling, grammar, or punctuation can cost you dearly. A poorly written email is insulting because it effectively says to the recipient: \u201cYou weren\u2019t important enough for me to take the time to ensure that this email was properly written.\u201d Worse, poor writing can cause miscommunication if it places the burden of interpretation on the reader to figure out what the writer meant to say if that\u2019s not clear. If the recipient acts on misinterpretations and others base their actions on that action, you can soon find that even small errors can have damaging ripple effects that infuriate everyone involved.\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>","rendered":"<p>Electronic mail, widely known as \u201cemail,\u201d is by volume the most popular written communication channel in the history of human civilization. With emails being so cheap and easy to send on desktop and laptop computers, as well as on mobile phones and tablets, a staggering 280<em>\u00a0billion<\/em>\u00a0emails are sent globally per\u00a0<em>day<\/em>\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">(Radicati, 2017)<\/a>\u2014that\u2019s over a hundred trillion per year. Most are for business purposes because email is such a flexible channel ideal for anything from short, routine information shares, requests, and responses the length of a text, to important formal messages delivering the content that letters and memos used to handle. Its ability to send a message to one person or as many people as you have addresses for, integrate with calendars for scheduling meetings and events, send document attachments, and send automatic replies makes it the most versatile communication channel in the workplace.<\/p>\n<p>This mind-boggling quantity of 3.2 million emails sent per second doesn\u2019t necessarily mean that quality is a non-issue for email, however. Because it has, to some extent, replaced mailed letters for formal correspondence, emails related to important occasions such as applying for and maintaining employment must be impeccably well written. Your email represents you in your physical absence, as well as the company you work for if that\u2019s the case, so it must be both well-written and appropriate.<\/p>\n<p>First, ensure that you really need an email to represent you because emailing merely to avoid speaking in person or calling by phone can do more harm than good. If an email is necessary, however, then it must be <em>good<\/em>. As people who make decisions about your livelihood, the employers and clients you email can be highly judgmental about the quality of your writing. To them, it\u2019s an indication of your professionalism, attention to detail, education, and even intelligence. The writing quality in a single important email can be the difference between getting hired and getting fired or remaining unemployed.<\/p>\n<p>Let\u2019s say, for instance, that you get an email from a customer and they mention in it that they\u2019ve been shopping around for a company to do a custom job for them. This means they\u2019re emailing other companies with the same inquiry. Let\u2019s say also that your competitors offer similar services at similar prices and are similarly reviewed positively online. With everything else being equal, the quality of the email responses may be the deciding factor. Responding to the customer quickly gives you an advantage because you show them that you can get things done promptly. If your email is also well written in a professional style and error-free in every way due to effective editing and proofreading, you stand a much better chance of getting the job.<\/p>\n<p>Comparing this with another company\u2019s email that came a few days later with multiple writing errors in it, the customer will likely go with the company that wrote the better email. Even though the quality of communication doesn\u2019t necessarily guarantee quality of work in the product or service a company provides, customers will assume a connection. Indeed, the quality of communication can certainly say volumes about work ethic and attention to detail. We must all try to make a similarly strong impression in any situation where the quality of email matters. Activity 6.1 demonstrates a standard email.<\/p>\n<h3>\n<div id=\"h5p-15\">\n<div class=\"h5p-iframe-wrapper\"><iframe id=\"h5p-iframe-15\" class=\"h5p-iframe\" data-content-id=\"15\" style=\"height:1px\" src=\"about:blank\" frameBorder=\"0\" scrolling=\"no\" title=\"Ch 6 Sample Standard Email\"><\/iframe><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/h3>\n<div id=\"slug-9-1-text-e-mail-and-netiquette\" class=\"chapter standard\">\n<div class=\"ugc chapter-ugc\">\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02\" class=\"section\">\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01\" class=\"section\">\n<p><sup>Activity 6.1 | Sample Standard Email<\/sup><\/p>\n<h3>Possible Email Structure<\/h3>\n<p>Activity 6.2 is a guide you can use to write a standard email.<\/p>\n<h3>\n<div id=\"h5p-20\">\n<div class=\"h5p-iframe-wrapper\"><iframe id=\"h5p-iframe-20\" class=\"h5p-iframe\" data-content-id=\"20\" style=\"height:1px\" src=\"about:blank\" frameBorder=\"0\" scrolling=\"no\" title=\"Ch 6 Possible Email Structure\"><\/iframe><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/h3>\n<p><sup>Activity 6.2 | Email Structure<\/sup><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s03\" class=\"section\">\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01\" class=\"section\">\n<h3 class=\"title editable block\">Tips for Effective Business Emails<\/h3>\n<p>If you&#8217;re struggling to write an email, err on the side of not wasting the reader&#8217;s time. Many readers get hundreds of emails a day. While a reader might sit down to read a letter or a memo, they will usually spend a few seconds scanning an email for relevant information before moving on to the next one. Unless your email is sensitive or you are breaking bad news, it&#8217;s nearly always a good idea to state the main point of the email clearly and to clearly tell the audience what you want them to do. For an email, you should tell the reader why you are writing, provide supporting details, then tell the reader what to do.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01\" class=\"section\">\n<p>Here are some tips for sending successful emails:<\/p>\n<ul id=\"mclean-ch09_s01_s02_s01_l01\" class=\"itemizedlist editable block\">\n<li>Use appropriate salutations: Proper salutations should demonstrate respect and avoid mix-ups in case a message is accidentally sent to the wrong recipient. For example, use a salutation like \u201cDear Ms. X,\u201d (external) or \u201cHi, Barry,\u201d or &#8220;Dear Barry,&#8221; (internal).<\/li>\n<li>Make subject lines clear: Subject lines should be clear, brief, and specific. This helps the recipient understand the essence of the message. For example, \u201cProposal attached\u201d or \u201cYour question of 10\/25.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>Be brief: Omit unnecessary words.<\/li>\n<li>Use a clear format: Include line breaks between sentences or divide your message into brief paragraphs for ease of reading.<\/li>\n<li>Have one clear purpose: If you find yourself covering more than one topic in your email, you should consider sending multiple emails so that your reader does not miss important information.<\/li>\n<li>Test links: If you include a link, test it to make sure it works.<\/li>\n<li>Announce attachments: If you include attachments, don&#8217;t forget to mention them in your message.<\/li>\n<li>Close with a signature: Identify yourself by creating a signature block that automatically contains your name and business contact information. It is becoming increasingly common for businesses to add First Nations Land Acknowledgements to their email signatures. It is important to find out from your organization if they use First Nations Land Acknowledgements and how to accurately include them in your signature.<\/li>\n<li>Reread, revise, and review: Catch and correct spelling and grammar mistakes before you press \u201csend.\u201d It will take more time and effort to undo the problems caused by a hasty, poorly written email than to get it right the first time.<\/li>\n<li>Reply promptly: Watch out for an emotional response\u2014never reply in anger\u2014but make a habit of replying to all emails within 24 hours, even if only to say that you will provide the requested information in 48 or 72 hours.<\/li>\n<li>Use \u201cReply All\u201d sparingly: Do not send your reply to everyone who received the initial email unless your message absolutely needs to be read by the entire group.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Before hitting the <em>send<\/em> button, revise and proofread your email. Put yourself in your reader\u2019s position and assess whether you\u2019ve achieved the purpose you set out to achieve in the first place. Evaluate also if you\u2019ve struck the appropriate tone and formality. After revising generally, <strong>always proofread<\/strong> an email. In any professional situation, but especially in important ones related to gaining and keeping employment, any typo or error related to spelling, grammar, or punctuation can cost you dearly. A poorly written email is insulting because it effectively says to the recipient: \u201cYou weren\u2019t important enough for me to take the time to ensure that this email was properly written.\u201d Worse, poor writing can cause miscommunication if it places the burden of interpretation on the reader to figure out what the writer meant to say if that\u2019s not clear. If the recipient acts on misinterpretations and others base their actions on that action, you can soon find that even small errors can have damaging ripple effects that infuriate everyone involved.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":847,"menu_order":2,"template":"","meta":{"pb_show_title":"on","pb_short_title":"","pb_subtitle":"","pb_authors":[],"pb_section_license":""},"chapter-type":[48],"contributor":[],"license":[],"class_list":["post-253","chapter","type-chapter","status-publish","hentry","chapter-type-numberless"],"part":249,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/253","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/chapter"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/847"}],"version-history":[{"count":12,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/253\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1201,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/253\/revisions\/1201"}],"part":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/249"}],"metadata":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/253\/metadata\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=253"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"chapter-type","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapter-type?post=253"},{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=253"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=253"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}