{"id":230,"date":"2022-04-26T16:08:04","date_gmt":"2022-04-26T20:08:04","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/?post_type=part&#038;p=230"},"modified":"2022-08-16T10:41:27","modified_gmt":"2022-08-16T14:41:27","slug":"chapter-5-the-revision-process","status":"publish","type":"part","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/part\/chapter-5-the-revision-process\/","title":{"raw":"Chapter 5: The Revision Process","rendered":"Chapter 5: The Revision Process"},"content":{"raw":"<div class=\"textbox textbox--learning-objectives\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\" style=\"text-align: left\">Learning Objectives<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Discuss the revision process<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Identify 4 main elements for revision<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Highlight some specific points to revise<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Explain how to revise for grammar<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<h3><img class=\"alignnone wp-image-667\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/04\/Thinking-about-the-topic3.png\" alt=\"Lightbulb \" width=\"21\" height=\"21\" \/>Thinking About The Topic<\/h3>\r\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li>What makes a document understandable, clear, and easy to read?<\/li>\r\n \t<li>How do you revise your writing? Do you type everything at once and then read and edit, or do you do it one paragraph at a time?<\/li>\r\n \t<li>How do you revise someone else\u2019s writing? Do you read it and write down notes or just verbally give them feedback in general? Is it different than when you do your own revision?<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<h3><img class=\"alignnone wp-image-690\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/05\/Experience-with-the-topic.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"22\" height=\"22\" \/> Watch &amp; Learn<\/h3>\r\nWatch the video below to learn more about this topic.\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\nhttps:\/\/youtu.be\/_mkwwjbaFOs\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\n<\/div>","rendered":"<div class=\"textbox textbox--learning-objectives\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\" style=\"text-align: left\">Learning Objectives<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<ul>\n<li>Discuss the revision process<\/li>\n<li>Identify 4 main elements for revision<\/li>\n<li>Highlight some specific points to revise<\/li>\n<li>Explain how to revise for grammar<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h3><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-667\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/04\/Thinking-about-the-topic3.png\" alt=\"Lightbulb\" width=\"21\" height=\"21\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/04\/Thinking-about-the-topic3.png 190w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/04\/Thinking-about-the-topic3-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/04\/Thinking-about-the-topic3-65x65.png 65w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 21px) 100vw, 21px\" \/>Thinking About The Topic<\/h3>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<ol>\n<li>What makes a document understandable, clear, and easy to read?<\/li>\n<li>How do you revise your writing? Do you type everything at once and then read and edit, or do you do it one paragraph at a time?<\/li>\n<li>How do you revise someone else\u2019s writing? Do you read it and write down notes or just verbally give them feedback in general? Is it different than when you do your own revision?<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h3><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-690\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/05\/Experience-with-the-topic.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"22\" height=\"22\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/05\/Experience-with-the-topic.png 96w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/983\/2022\/05\/Experience-with-the-topic-65x65.png 65w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 22px) 100vw, 22px\" \/> Watch &amp; Learn<\/h3>\n<p>Watch the video below to learn more about this topic.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" id=\"oembed-1\" title=\"The Review Process\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/_mkwwjbaFOs?feature=oembed&#38;rel=0\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"parent":0,"menu_order":5,"template":"","meta":{"pb_part_invisible":false,"pb_part_invisible_string":""},"contributor":[],"license":[],"class_list":["post-230","part","type-part","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/230","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/part"}],"version-history":[{"count":9,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/230\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1055,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/230\/revisions\/1055"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=230"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=230"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/businesswritingessentials2\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=230"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}