Other Sentence Structure Concerns
Run-on sentences and fragments are the most disruptive issues with sentence structure. We want to get rid of those at all costs.
But other structural issues can disrupt the clarity of a sentence as well. The more aware you are of these potential issues, the more mindful you can be when you craft and refine your own sentences.
In this part of the book we’re going to discuss two of these lesser structural concerns: passive voice and parallel structure.