{"id":386,"date":"2026-02-09T12:54:15","date_gmt":"2026-02-09T17:54:15","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/technicalwriting2ed\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=386"},"modified":"2026-03-26T20:11:46","modified_gmt":"2026-03-27T00:11:46","slug":"5-4-integrating-and-synthesizing-sources","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/technicalwriting2ed\/chapter\/5-4-integrating-and-synthesizing-sources\/","title":{"raw":"5.4  Synthesizing and Integrating Sources","rendered":"5.4  Synthesizing and Integrating Sources"},"content":{"raw":"&nbsp;\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--learning-objectives\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">5.4 Learning Objectives<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n\r\nThis section focuses on the <strong>what<\/strong>, <strong>why<\/strong>, and <strong>how<\/strong> of synthesizing sources, and will help you\r\n<ol>\r\n \t<li>Understand the various purposes for source synthesis<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Apply the \u201crhetorical moves\u201d involved in synthesizing source materials<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Integrate quoted, paraphrased, and summarized material from sources clearly and effectively to achieve your purpose<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<h1>Synthesizing Sources<\/h1>\r\nSynthesizing sources is arguably the most important writing move you will use in both academic and professional context. Where summarizing involves accurately conveying the main points from a source in condensed form, synthesis entails combining ideas and research from a variety of perspectives, voices and perhaps even fields of study, in order to both summarize these ideas and use them to support and develop your ideas. This can help establish your understanding of the complexity of the issue, determine your own perspective on this issue, and join the \u201cscholarly conversation.\u201d If you\u2019ve read a <a href=\"https:\/\/ecp.engineering.utoronto.ca\/resources\/online-handbook\/components-of-documents\/literature-reviews\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">literature review <\/a>or a <a href=\"https:\/\/guides.library.utoronto.ca\/systematicreviews\/metaanalysis\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">meta-analysis<\/a>, then you have seen synthesis in action. If you have checked several online restaurant reviews so that you can recommend the best chicken vindaloo in town to your visiting friend, you have engaged in a kind of source synthesis.\r\n\r\nAs a student, you will engage in synthesis when writing something that draws on information from multiple sources, such as a research essay or report. As a professional, you might combine information from various sources to understand a problem and recommend a solution to a workplace problem.\u00a0Synthesis, as a rhetorical move, allows you to \u201cborrow\u201d credibility and logical support from reliable research sources, to help you convince your reader to accept your position as valid. However, that does not necessarily mean that all of the sources you use will \u201cagree\u201d with or directly support your perspective.\r\n\r\nYou might consult sources that offer a range of approaches to a topic to establish a consensus among experts, or they might indicate what controversies and diverging approaches exist in the literature. You should avoid \u201ccherry picking\u201d, that is, only using sources that directly support your claims; look for a representative sample of sources that allow you to examine and include diverging viewpoints and potentially conflicting research. This approach will provide you with a sophisticated understanding of the complexity of the issue you are writing about. It also might allow you to see where \u201cgaps\u201d exist in the current knowledge and research, providing a potential \u201cspringboard\u201d for your own research or approach.\r\n<h1>Synthesis \"Moves\"<\/h1>\r\nSynthesizing source material entails a number of specific rhetorical \"moves\" that you might use, depending on your purpose. Scheidt and Middleton[footnote]D. Scheidt and H. Middleton \u201cThe tacit values of sourced writing: A study of source \u2018engagement\u2019 and the FYW Program as community of practice,\u201d <em>WPA. Writing Program Administration<\/em>, vol. 45, no. 1, 2021[\/footnote] identify 5 rhetorical moves that authors use when incorporating ideas from other authors (<em>inform, explain, react, develop, <\/em>and<em> connect)\u00a0 <\/em>and they explain why you might use them:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>INFORM<\/strong>: you might refer to specific information, facts, definitions, etc., from respected sources to simply provide reliable information and background context that your reader will find credible.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>EXPLAIN<\/strong>: you might summarize, paraphrase, or integrate quotations from a source in a way that moves beyond merely presenting facts. You might note that the sources have something significant to say, or you might be providing an in-depth explanation with help from the source, using the source to help you establish a framework and do argumentative or rhetorical work.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>REACT<\/strong>: you might take a position in relation to the source and react to the source\u2019s ideas. You might use a source that you don\u2019t quite agree with to exemplify a common misunderstanding or set up your alternative perspective; or you might express your reaction by noting that the source ideas are \u201csurprising\u201d or \u201cshocking.\u201d<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>DEVELOP<\/strong>: you might build upon or analyze ideas from the sources. You might apply them to a new situation, take them in a slightly new direction, or explore them in more depth.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>CONNECT<\/strong>: you might make connections between two (or more) texts or two (or more) authors to show how ideas relate to each other in a broader context, show a variety of perspectives, or engage in compare and contrast.<\/p>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\"><strong>EXERCISE 5.2 <\/strong>\u00a0 Read the two excerpts below and identify where the authors are using the synthesis moves\u00a0 of informing, explaining,\u00a0 reacting, developing, and connecting.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n\r\n\u201cA recent study showed that, in some contexts, [rhetorical framing] might have an even stronger effect on our reasoning than our own political views. In the study, participants were presented with brief passages about crime in a hypothetical city named Addison. For half of the participants, a few words were altered so that the passage said that crime was a \u201cbeast preying\u201d on the city of Addison. For the other half, crime was described as a \u201cvirus infecting\u201d the city. Simply changing the metaphor in this passage by altering a few words influenced people\u2019s beliefs about crime more than pre-existing differences in opinion between Republicans and Democrats. Those exposed to the \u201cbeast\u201d metaphor were more likely to believe that crime should be dealt with by using punitive measures, whereas those exposed to the \u201cvirus\u201d metaphor were more likely to support reformative measures. One of the most remarkable things about the metaphor\u2019s influence in this study was that it was covert. When participants were asked about what influenced their decision, no one mentioned the metaphor. They instead pointed to other aspects of the passage that were the same for all participants, such as statistics.\u201d\r\n\r\n(Steve Rathje, \"<a href=\"https:\/\/www.theguardian.com\/science\/head-quarters\/2017\/jul\/20\/the-power-of-framing-its-not-what-you-say-its-how-you-say-it\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">The power of framing: It's not what you say, it's how you say it<\/a>.\" <em>The Guardian<\/em>, July 2017)\r\n\r\n<hr \/>\r\n\r\n\u201cPrevious work has demonstrated that using different metaphors can lead people to reason differently about notions like time, emotion, or electricity [6\u201311]. For example, people\u2019s reasoning about electricity flow differed systematically depending on the metaphoric frame used to describe electricity (flowing water vs. teeming crowds) [6]. Such findings on metaphorical framing are grounded in a larger body of work that has established the importance of linguistic framing in reasoning [12], and the importance of narrative structure in instantiating meaning [13]. However, questions about the pervasiveness of the role of metaphor in thinking remain. Critics argue that very little work has empirically demonstrated that metaphors in language influence how people think about and solve real-world problems [14].\r\n\r\nIn this paper we investigate the role of metaphor in reasoning about a domain of societal importance: social policy on crime.\u201d\r\n\r\n(P.H. Thibodeau and L. Boroditsy, \"<a href=\"https:\/\/journals.plos.org\/plosone\/article?id=10.1371\/journal.pone.0016782\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Metaphors we think with: The role of metaphor in reasoning<\/a>,\" PLOS One, 23 Feb. 2011)\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\nExamining these excerpts, you might note that Rathje <em>informs<\/em> the reader about the study, <em>explains<\/em> the study\u2019s methodology and findings, <em>reacts<\/em> to the results (\u201cone of the most remarkable things\u2026\u201d), and <em>connects<\/em> it to his overall thesis. (Note that this passage does not include in-text citations, because it is published in an online newspaper, not in an academic journal.) The authors of the second passage (from an academic article) use synthesis to <em>explain, develop<\/em> and <em>connect<\/em> ideas from several other sources in order to set up their own contribution to the scholarly conversation by noting where the gaps are.\r\n<h2>Applying Synthesis Moves<\/h2>\r\nWhen what you are writing requires research -- say a research essay for school or business proposal for work -- you might synthesize information from sources, applying the <em>inform, explain, react, develop, <\/em>and<em> connect<\/em> strategies, in the following ways:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>In the Introduction<\/strong>: use sources to establish the background information and context necessary to understand your purpose and the \u201ccontroversy\u201d or \u201cproblem\u201d you are addressing. You will need to include data that helps establish why this issue needs to be addressed, what current impacts are occurring, and who is directly or indirectly impacted.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Defining your Scope: <\/strong>use sources to justify the approach or framework you are using and the limitations you are applying to your project. For example, you might explain how other researchers have approached the problem, what frameworks or heuristics they have used, how similar solutions have been implemented, demographic data about users or other relevant parties, and how you have determined objectives and constraints for the problem you are addressing.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Validating and Supporting:<\/strong> use sources to help you support your claims and validate your solution idea. Sources might help you justify specific design features and principles, and convince your reader that your proposed idea will provide measurable benefits. You might include research on similar designs to prove your design is feasible; user experience research to show that your design is \u201cuser-friendly\u201d and accessible; sustainability research to show that your design will not have negative environmental impacts; and so on.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Addressing Opposition<\/strong>: depending on context, you may need to look at sources that might disagree with your approach or oppose your solution idea. The more you understand why someone might oppose your idea, the stronger you can make your case by addressing their concerns. In some cases, you might need to concede that they have some good arguments that need to be further considered or researched. This also bolsters your credibility as a person who is open to seeing other perspectives and not blindly following only one idea.<\/p>\r\nYou might use a chart like the one below to brainstorm specific ways that you might use <em>your<\/em> secondary sources to support, develop, explain, diverge from or connect ideas in your research essay.\r\n<table class=\"grid\" style=\"border-collapse: collapse;width: 100%\" border=\"0\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Author and Title info<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Main Thesis or Argument<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Types of Evidence Used<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Important ideas or quotations<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Possible uses (inform, react explain, etc)<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\">&nbsp;\r\n\r\n&nbsp;<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\">&nbsp;\r\n\r\n&nbsp;<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\">&nbsp;\r\n\r\n&nbsp;<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n<h1>Integrating Sources Using Quotation, Paraphrase and Summary<\/h1>\r\nIntegrating the words and ideas of others coherently and fluently into your own writing can be challenging from a grammatical and structural perspective. Structurally, there are three main ways of integrating source material: <strong>quoting<\/strong> directly, <strong>paraphrasing<\/strong>, and <strong>summarizing<\/strong>. Each of these methods had a set of conventions you should follow.\r\n<h2>Quoting Sources<\/h2>\r\nDirect quotations are useful when you want to call attention to the specific words or style of language being used by the author as the focus of your analysis, or when the author has stated something in such a way that you really cannot improve on or condense effectively. Quotations should generally be used sparingly because too many quotations can interfere with the flow of ideas and make it seem like you don\u2019t have enough ideas of your own. Quotations must be carefully contextualized both argumentatively and grammatically.\r\n\r\n<strong>CONTEXT<\/strong>: A quotation, statistic or bit of data generally does not speak for itself; you must provide context and an explanation for quotations you use. Essentially, you should create a \u201cquotation sandwich\u201d where you\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Introduce the the context (the idea that the quotation will support)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Quote (and cite)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Explain how the quoted information supports your idea.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<strong>GRAMMAR<\/strong>: quoted words and phrases must integrated grammatically with your own so that information flows logically and coherently. There are three main methods to integrate quotations grammatically:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><strong>Seamless Integration Method<\/strong>: embed the quoted words as if they were an organic part of your sentence (if you read the sentence aloud, your listeners would not know there was a quotation).<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Signal Phrase Method:<\/strong> use a signal phrase (Author + Verb) to introduce the quotation, clearly indicating that the quotation comes from a specific source<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Colon Method<\/strong>: introduce the quotation with a complete clause ending in a colon, and use the quoted material to explain or exemplify the idea in your introductory clause.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--examples\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\" style=\"text-align: center\">Three Methods of Integrating Quotations<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n\r\nConsider the following opening sentence (and famous comma splice) from\u00a0<em>A Tale of Two Cities<\/em> by Charles Dickens:\r\n<p style=\"text-align: center\"><em>\"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times\" [1].<\/em><\/p>\r\n\r\n\r\n<hr \/>\r\n\r\n<strong>Seamless Integration Method<\/strong>: embed the quotation, or excerpts from the quotation, as a seamless part of your sentence:\r\n<blockquote>Charles Dickens begins his novel with the paradoxical observation that the eighteenth century was both \u201cthe best of times\u201d and \u201cthe worst of times\u201d [1].<\/blockquote>\r\n<strong>Signal Phrase Method:<\/strong> introduce the author and then the quote using a signal verb (scroll down to the Using Signal Phrases section below see a list of common verbs that signal you are about to quote someone)<em>\r\n<\/em>\r\n<blockquote>Describing the eighteenth century, Charles Dickens observes, \u201cIt was the best of times, it was the worst of times\u201d [1].<\/blockquote>\r\n<strong>Colon Method:<\/strong> If your own introductory words form a complete sentence, you can use a colon to introduce the quotation to give it added emphasis:\r\n<blockquote>Dickens defines the eighteenth century as a time of paradox: \u201cIt was the best of times, it was the worst of times\u201d [1].\r\n\r\nThe eighteenth century was a time of paradox: \u201cIt was the best of times, it was the worst of times\u201d [1].<\/blockquote>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<h3>Editing Quotations<\/h3>\r\nPlacing quotation marks around material indicates that these are the <strong><em>exact<\/em><\/strong> words of the original author. However, sometimes the text you want to quote will not fit grammatically or clearly into your sentence without making some changes. Perhaps you need to replace a pronoun in the quote with the actual noun to make the context clear, or perhaps the verb tense does not fit. There are two main ways that you can edit a quotation to make it fit grammatically with your own sentence:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Use square brackets<\/strong>: to reflect changes or additions to a quote, place square brackets [like this] around any words that you have changed or added.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Use ellipses (3 dots):<\/strong> to show that some text has been removed, use the ellipses. Three dots indicate that some words have been removed from the sentence; 4 dots indicate that a substantial amount of text has been deleted, including the period at the end of a sentence.<\/p>\r\nHere is a sample excerpt from Henry Petroski's \"The Obligation of an Engineer,\" followed by examples of how you might edit quoted material to suit your needs.\r\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\r\n\r\n\u201cEngineers are always striving for success, but failure is seldom far from their minds. In the case of Canadian engineers, this focus on potentially catastrophic flaws in a design is rooted in a failure that occurred over a century ago. In 1907 a bridge of enormous proportions collapsed while still under construction in Quebec. Planners expected that when completed, the 1,800-foot main span of the cantilever bridge would set a world record for long-span bridges of all types, many of which had come to be realized at a great price. According to one superstition, a bridge would claim one life for every million dollars spent on it. In fact, by the time the Quebec Bridge would finally be completed, in 1917, almost ninety construction workers would have been killed in the course of building the $25 million structure\u201d [3].\r\n\r\n[3]\u00a0 H. Petroski, \u201cThe obligation of an engineer,\u201d in <em>To Forgive Design<\/em>, Boston: Belknap Press, 2014, p. 175.\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\nYou are allowed to change the original words or cut some material, but only if you signal those changes appropriately with square brackets or ellipses:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Example 1:<\/strong>\u00a0 Petroski asserts that while \u201c[e]ngineers are always striving for success... failure is seldom far from their minds\u201d [3; p. 175].<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Example 2<\/strong>:\u00a0 Petroski recounts the story of a large bridge that was constructed at the beginning of the twentieth century in Quebec, asserting that \u201cby the time [it was done], in 1917, almost ninety construction workers [were] killed in the course of building the $25 million structure\u201d [3; p. 175].<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Example 3<\/strong>:\u00a0 \u201cPlanners expected that when completed the \u2026 bridge would set a world record for long-span bridges of all types\u201d [3; p. 175].<\/p>\r\nIf you find that you have to incorporate a lot of square brackets and ellipses to make the quotation work, you might be better of simply paraphrasing instead of trying to quote.\r\n<h2>Paraphrasing and Summarizing<\/h2>\r\nInstead of using direct quotations, which can become cumbersome, you can paraphrase and summarize evidence to integrate it into your argument more concisely. Both paraphrase and summary requires you to read the source carefully, understand it, and then rewrite the idea in your own words to avoid \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.merriam-webster.com\/wordplay\/words-were-watching-patchwriting\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">patchwriting<\/a>.\u201d Using these forms of integration demonstrates your understanding of the source, because rephrasing requires a good grasp of the core ideas. Paraphrasing and summarizing also makes integrating someone else\u2019s ideas into your own sentences and paragraphs a little easier, as you do not have to merge their grammar and writing style with your own.\r\n\r\nParaphrase and summary differ in that paraphrases focuses on a smaller, specific section of text that when paraphrased may be close to the length of the original. For example, you might paraphrase a concluding portion of the Petroski excerpt above like this:\r\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\r\n\r\nAt the end of its construction, the large cantilever bridge cost $25 million, but the cost in lives lost far exceeded the prediction of one death for each million spent. While planers hoped that the bridge would set a global record, in fact, its claim to fame was much more grim [3].\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\nSummaries, on the other hand, are condensations of large chunks of text, so they are much shorter than the original and capture only the main ideas. A summary of the above excerpt might look like this:\r\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\r\n\r\nAccording to Petroski, a large bridge built in Quebec during the early part of the twentieth century claimed the lives of dozens of workers during its construction. The collapse of the bridge early in its construction represented a pivotal design failure for Canadian engineers that shaped the profession [3].\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--examples\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">What is Patchwriting?<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n\r\n\"When a writer takes sentences from the original document and substitutes synonyms for some words, changes the order of others, and maybe reworks a few phrases, this person isn\u2019t creating a successful summary. <strong>Instead, this way of replicating features of the original text too closely is called patch-writing.<\/strong> Even when the source is cited, patch-writing is usually considered plagiarism because the writer is implying they reworked the original text more than they did.\" (Humphreys and Kelly, <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/chapter\/common-sub-genres-of-academic-writing-or-what-youll-be-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Why Write<\/a>)\r\n\r\nCompare the original quote from the Petroski excerpt with the example of patchwriting beside it:\r\n<table class=\"grid landscape\" style=\"border-collapse: collapse;width: 100%\" border=\"0\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%;text-align: center\"><strong>Original quote<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%;text-align: center\"><strong>Patch-writing<\/strong><\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">\"Planners expected that when completed, the 1,800-foot main span of the cantilever bridge would set a world record for long-span bridges of all types, many of which had come to be realized at a great price. According to one superstition, a bridge would claim one life for every million dollars spent on it. In fact, by the time the Quebec Bridge would finally be completed, in 1917, almost ninety construction workers would have been killed in the course of building the $25 million structure\u201d [3].<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Designers predicted that when it was done, the main span of the cantilever bridge would set a world record for all types of long-span bridges, many of which had been very costly. One superstition predicted that a bridge would take one life for every million dollars it cost. By the time the Quebec Bridge was completed, in 1917, almost ninety construction workers had been killed in process of constructing the $25 dollar bridge [3].<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<h1>Using Signal Phrases<\/h1>\r\n<span style=\"color: black\">Verbs like <i>says, writes, talks about,<\/i> or <i>discusses<\/i> tend to be over-used to signal a quotation and are vague in that they do not provide much information about the <em>rhetorical purpose<\/em>\u00a0of the author. Consider using more rhetorically descriptive verbs when signalling that you are integrating the words or ideas of a source. For example, is the author <i>explaining<\/i> something? <i>Arguing<\/i> a point? <em>Providing examples<\/em>? <em>Estimating<\/em>? <em>Recommending<\/em>? <em>Warning<\/em> or <em>urging<\/em> the reader? Choose a verb that accurately represents the author\u2019s intent. <\/span>\r\n\r\n<span style=\"color: black\">The list of signal verbs below offers suggestions for introducing quoted, paraphrased, and summarized material that convey more information about the rhetorical \"move\" the author is making than verbs like \u201csays\u201d or \u201cwrites\u201d or \u201cdiscusses.\u201d<\/span>\r\n<table class=\"grid\" style=\"border-collapse: collapse;width: 100%\" border=\"0\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author makes a claim<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author recommends<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author disagrees or questions<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author agrees<\/th>\r\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author shows<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">argues\r\nasserts\r\nbelieves\r\nclaims\r\nemphasizes\r\ninsists\r\nsuggests\r\nhypothesizes\r\nmaintains<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">advocates for\r\nproposes\r\ncalls for\r\ndemands\r\nencourages\r\nimplores\r\npleads\r\nrecommends\r\nurges\r\nwarns<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">challenges\r\ncomplicates\r\ncriticizes\r\nqualifies\r\ncounters\r\ncontradicts\r\nrefutes\r\nrejects\r\ndenies\r\nquestions<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">admires\r\nendorses\r\nsupports\r\naffirms\r\ncorroborates\r\nverifies\r\nreaffirms<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">illustrates\r\nconveys\r\nreveals\r\ndemonstrates\r\npoints out\r\nexemplifies\r\nindicates<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n&nbsp;","rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--learning-objectives\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">5.4 Learning Objectives<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p>This section focuses on the <strong>what<\/strong>, <strong>why<\/strong>, and <strong>how<\/strong> of synthesizing sources, and will help you<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>Understand the various purposes for source synthesis<\/li>\n<li>Apply the \u201crhetorical moves\u201d involved in synthesizing source materials<\/li>\n<li>Integrate quoted, paraphrased, and summarized material from sources clearly and effectively to achieve your purpose<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h1>Synthesizing Sources<\/h1>\n<p>Synthesizing sources is arguably the most important writing move you will use in both academic and professional context. Where summarizing involves accurately conveying the main points from a source in condensed form, synthesis entails combining ideas and research from a variety of perspectives, voices and perhaps even fields of study, in order to both summarize these ideas and use them to support and develop your ideas. This can help establish your understanding of the complexity of the issue, determine your own perspective on this issue, and join the \u201cscholarly conversation.\u201d If you\u2019ve read a <a href=\"https:\/\/ecp.engineering.utoronto.ca\/resources\/online-handbook\/components-of-documents\/literature-reviews\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">literature review <\/a>or a <a href=\"https:\/\/guides.library.utoronto.ca\/systematicreviews\/metaanalysis\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">meta-analysis<\/a>, then you have seen synthesis in action. If you have checked several online restaurant reviews so that you can recommend the best chicken vindaloo in town to your visiting friend, you have engaged in a kind of source synthesis.<\/p>\n<p>As a student, you will engage in synthesis when writing something that draws on information from multiple sources, such as a research essay or report. As a professional, you might combine information from various sources to understand a problem and recommend a solution to a workplace problem.\u00a0Synthesis, as a rhetorical move, allows you to \u201cborrow\u201d credibility and logical support from reliable research sources, to help you convince your reader to accept your position as valid. However, that does not necessarily mean that all of the sources you use will \u201cagree\u201d with or directly support your perspective.<\/p>\n<p>You might consult sources that offer a range of approaches to a topic to establish a consensus among experts, or they might indicate what controversies and diverging approaches exist in the literature. You should avoid \u201ccherry picking\u201d, that is, only using sources that directly support your claims; look for a representative sample of sources that allow you to examine and include diverging viewpoints and potentially conflicting research. This approach will provide you with a sophisticated understanding of the complexity of the issue you are writing about. It also might allow you to see where \u201cgaps\u201d exist in the current knowledge and research, providing a potential \u201cspringboard\u201d for your own research or approach.<\/p>\n<h1>Synthesis &#8220;Moves&#8221;<\/h1>\n<p>Synthesizing source material entails a number of specific rhetorical &#8220;moves&#8221; that you might use, depending on your purpose. Scheidt and Middleton<a class=\"footnote\" title=\"D. Scheidt and H. Middleton \u201cThe tacit values of sourced writing: A study of source \u2018engagement\u2019 and the FYW Program as community of practice,\u201d WPA. Writing Program Administration, vol. 45, no. 1, 2021\" id=\"return-footnote-386-1\" href=\"#footnote-386-1\" aria-label=\"Footnote 1\"><sup class=\"footnote\">[1]<\/sup><\/a> identify 5 rhetorical moves that authors use when incorporating ideas from other authors (<em>inform, explain, react, develop, <\/em>and<em> connect)\u00a0 <\/em>and they explain why you might use them:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>INFORM<\/strong>: you might refer to specific information, facts, definitions, etc., from respected sources to simply provide reliable information and background context that your reader will find credible.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>EXPLAIN<\/strong>: you might summarize, paraphrase, or integrate quotations from a source in a way that moves beyond merely presenting facts. You might note that the sources have something significant to say, or you might be providing an in-depth explanation with help from the source, using the source to help you establish a framework and do argumentative or rhetorical work.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>REACT<\/strong>: you might take a position in relation to the source and react to the source\u2019s ideas. You might use a source that you don\u2019t quite agree with to exemplify a common misunderstanding or set up your alternative perspective; or you might express your reaction by noting that the source ideas are \u201csurprising\u201d or \u201cshocking.\u201d<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>DEVELOP<\/strong>: you might build upon or analyze ideas from the sources. You might apply them to a new situation, take them in a slightly new direction, or explore them in more depth.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>CONNECT<\/strong>: you might make connections between two (or more) texts or two (or more) authors to show how ideas relate to each other in a broader context, show a variety of perspectives, or engage in compare and contrast.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\"><strong>EXERCISE 5.2 <\/strong>\u00a0 Read the two excerpts below and identify where the authors are using the synthesis moves\u00a0 of informing, explaining,\u00a0 reacting, developing, and connecting.<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p>\u201cA recent study showed that, in some contexts, [rhetorical framing] might have an even stronger effect on our reasoning than our own political views. In the study, participants were presented with brief passages about crime in a hypothetical city named Addison. For half of the participants, a few words were altered so that the passage said that crime was a \u201cbeast preying\u201d on the city of Addison. For the other half, crime was described as a \u201cvirus infecting\u201d the city. Simply changing the metaphor in this passage by altering a few words influenced people\u2019s beliefs about crime more than pre-existing differences in opinion between Republicans and Democrats. Those exposed to the \u201cbeast\u201d metaphor were more likely to believe that crime should be dealt with by using punitive measures, whereas those exposed to the \u201cvirus\u201d metaphor were more likely to support reformative measures. One of the most remarkable things about the metaphor\u2019s influence in this study was that it was covert. When participants were asked about what influenced their decision, no one mentioned the metaphor. They instead pointed to other aspects of the passage that were the same for all participants, such as statistics.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>(Steve Rathje, &#8220;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.theguardian.com\/science\/head-quarters\/2017\/jul\/20\/the-power-of-framing-its-not-what-you-say-its-how-you-say-it\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">The power of framing: It&#8217;s not what you say, it&#8217;s how you say it<\/a>.&#8221; <em>The Guardian<\/em>, July 2017)<\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p>\u201cPrevious work has demonstrated that using different metaphors can lead people to reason differently about notions like time, emotion, or electricity [6\u201311]. For example, people\u2019s reasoning about electricity flow differed systematically depending on the metaphoric frame used to describe electricity (flowing water vs. teeming crowds) [6]. Such findings on metaphorical framing are grounded in a larger body of work that has established the importance of linguistic framing in reasoning [12], and the importance of narrative structure in instantiating meaning [13]. However, questions about the pervasiveness of the role of metaphor in thinking remain. Critics argue that very little work has empirically demonstrated that metaphors in language influence how people think about and solve real-world problems [14].<\/p>\n<p>In this paper we investigate the role of metaphor in reasoning about a domain of societal importance: social policy on crime.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>(P.H. Thibodeau and L. Boroditsy, &#8220;<a href=\"https:\/\/journals.plos.org\/plosone\/article?id=10.1371\/journal.pone.0016782\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Metaphors we think with: The role of metaphor in reasoning<\/a>,&#8221; PLOS One, 23 Feb. 2011)<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>Examining these excerpts, you might note that Rathje <em>informs<\/em> the reader about the study, <em>explains<\/em> the study\u2019s methodology and findings, <em>reacts<\/em> to the results (\u201cone of the most remarkable things\u2026\u201d), and <em>connects<\/em> it to his overall thesis. (Note that this passage does not include in-text citations, because it is published in an online newspaper, not in an academic journal.) The authors of the second passage (from an academic article) use synthesis to <em>explain, develop<\/em> and <em>connect<\/em> ideas from several other sources in order to set up their own contribution to the scholarly conversation by noting where the gaps are.<\/p>\n<h2>Applying Synthesis Moves<\/h2>\n<p>When what you are writing requires research &#8212; say a research essay for school or business proposal for work &#8212; you might synthesize information from sources, applying the <em>inform, explain, react, develop, <\/em>and<em> connect<\/em> strategies, in the following ways:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>In the Introduction<\/strong>: use sources to establish the background information and context necessary to understand your purpose and the \u201ccontroversy\u201d or \u201cproblem\u201d you are addressing. You will need to include data that helps establish why this issue needs to be addressed, what current impacts are occurring, and who is directly or indirectly impacted.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Defining your Scope: <\/strong>use sources to justify the approach or framework you are using and the limitations you are applying to your project. For example, you might explain how other researchers have approached the problem, what frameworks or heuristics they have used, how similar solutions have been implemented, demographic data about users or other relevant parties, and how you have determined objectives and constraints for the problem you are addressing.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Validating and Supporting:<\/strong> use sources to help you support your claims and validate your solution idea. Sources might help you justify specific design features and principles, and convince your reader that your proposed idea will provide measurable benefits. You might include research on similar designs to prove your design is feasible; user experience research to show that your design is \u201cuser-friendly\u201d and accessible; sustainability research to show that your design will not have negative environmental impacts; and so on.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Addressing Opposition<\/strong>: depending on context, you may need to look at sources that might disagree with your approach or oppose your solution idea. The more you understand why someone might oppose your idea, the stronger you can make your case by addressing their concerns. In some cases, you might need to concede that they have some good arguments that need to be further considered or researched. This also bolsters your credibility as a person who is open to seeing other perspectives and not blindly following only one idea.<\/p>\n<p>You might use a chart like the one below to brainstorm specific ways that you might use <em>your<\/em> secondary sources to support, develop, explain, diverge from or connect ideas in your research essay.<\/p>\n<table class=\"grid\" style=\"border-collapse: collapse;width: 100%\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Author and Title info<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Main Thesis or Argument<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Types of Evidence Used<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Important ideas or quotations<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 20%\">Possible uses (inform, react explain, etc)<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 20%\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h1>Integrating Sources Using Quotation, Paraphrase and Summary<\/h1>\n<p>Integrating the words and ideas of others coherently and fluently into your own writing can be challenging from a grammatical and structural perspective. Structurally, there are three main ways of integrating source material: <strong>quoting<\/strong> directly, <strong>paraphrasing<\/strong>, and <strong>summarizing<\/strong>. Each of these methods had a set of conventions you should follow.<\/p>\n<h2>Quoting Sources<\/h2>\n<p>Direct quotations are useful when you want to call attention to the specific words or style of language being used by the author as the focus of your analysis, or when the author has stated something in such a way that you really cannot improve on or condense effectively. Quotations should generally be used sparingly because too many quotations can interfere with the flow of ideas and make it seem like you don\u2019t have enough ideas of your own. Quotations must be carefully contextualized both argumentatively and grammatically.<\/p>\n<p><strong>CONTEXT<\/strong>: A quotation, statistic or bit of data generally does not speak for itself; you must provide context and an explanation for quotations you use. Essentially, you should create a \u201cquotation sandwich\u201d where you<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Introduce the the context (the idea that the quotation will support)<\/li>\n<li>Quote (and cite)<\/li>\n<li>Explain how the quoted information supports your idea.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>GRAMMAR<\/strong>: quoted words and phrases must integrated grammatically with your own so that information flows logically and coherently. There are three main methods to integrate quotations grammatically:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Seamless Integration Method<\/strong>: embed the quoted words as if they were an organic part of your sentence (if you read the sentence aloud, your listeners would not know there was a quotation).<\/li>\n<li><strong>Signal Phrase Method:<\/strong> use a signal phrase (Author + Verb) to introduce the quotation, clearly indicating that the quotation comes from a specific source<\/li>\n<li><strong>Colon Method<\/strong>: introduce the quotation with a complete clause ending in a colon, and use the quoted material to explain or exemplify the idea in your introductory clause.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--examples\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\" style=\"text-align: center\">Three Methods of Integrating Quotations<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p>Consider the following opening sentence (and famous comma splice) from\u00a0<em>A Tale of Two Cities<\/em> by Charles Dickens:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center\"><em>&#8220;It was the best of times, it was the worst of times&#8221; [1].<\/em><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><strong>Seamless Integration Method<\/strong>: embed the quotation, or excerpts from the quotation, as a seamless part of your sentence:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Charles Dickens begins his novel with the paradoxical observation that the eighteenth century was both \u201cthe best of times\u201d and \u201cthe worst of times\u201d [1].<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><strong>Signal Phrase Method:<\/strong> introduce the author and then the quote using a signal verb (scroll down to the Using Signal Phrases section below see a list of common verbs that signal you are about to quote someone)<em><br \/>\n<\/em><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Describing the eighteenth century, Charles Dickens observes, \u201cIt was the best of times, it was the worst of times\u201d [1].<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><strong>Colon Method:<\/strong> If your own introductory words form a complete sentence, you can use a colon to introduce the quotation to give it added emphasis:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Dickens defines the eighteenth century as a time of paradox: \u201cIt was the best of times, it was the worst of times\u201d [1].<\/p>\n<p>The eighteenth century was a time of paradox: \u201cIt was the best of times, it was the worst of times\u201d [1].<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h3>Editing Quotations<\/h3>\n<p>Placing quotation marks around material indicates that these are the <strong><em>exact<\/em><\/strong> words of the original author. However, sometimes the text you want to quote will not fit grammatically or clearly into your sentence without making some changes. Perhaps you need to replace a pronoun in the quote with the actual noun to make the context clear, or perhaps the verb tense does not fit. There are two main ways that you can edit a quotation to make it fit grammatically with your own sentence:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Use square brackets<\/strong>: to reflect changes or additions to a quote, place square brackets [like this] around any words that you have changed or added.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Use ellipses (3 dots):<\/strong> to show that some text has been removed, use the ellipses. Three dots indicate that some words have been removed from the sentence; 4 dots indicate that a substantial amount of text has been deleted, including the period at the end of a sentence.<\/p>\n<p>Here is a sample excerpt from Henry Petroski&#8217;s &#8220;The Obligation of an Engineer,&#8221; followed by examples of how you might edit quoted material to suit your needs.<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<p>\u201cEngineers are always striving for success, but failure is seldom far from their minds. In the case of Canadian engineers, this focus on potentially catastrophic flaws in a design is rooted in a failure that occurred over a century ago. In 1907 a bridge of enormous proportions collapsed while still under construction in Quebec. Planners expected that when completed, the 1,800-foot main span of the cantilever bridge would set a world record for long-span bridges of all types, many of which had come to be realized at a great price. According to one superstition, a bridge would claim one life for every million dollars spent on it. In fact, by the time the Quebec Bridge would finally be completed, in 1917, almost ninety construction workers would have been killed in the course of building the $25 million structure\u201d [3].<\/p>\n<p>[3]\u00a0 H. Petroski, \u201cThe obligation of an engineer,\u201d in <em>To Forgive Design<\/em>, Boston: Belknap Press, 2014, p. 175.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>You are allowed to change the original words or cut some material, but only if you signal those changes appropriately with square brackets or ellipses:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Example 1:<\/strong>\u00a0 Petroski asserts that while \u201c[e]ngineers are always striving for success&#8230; failure is seldom far from their minds\u201d [3; p. 175].<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Example 2<\/strong>:\u00a0 Petroski recounts the story of a large bridge that was constructed at the beginning of the twentieth century in Quebec, asserting that \u201cby the time [it was done], in 1917, almost ninety construction workers [were] killed in the course of building the $25 million structure\u201d [3; p. 175].<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px\"><strong>Example 3<\/strong>:\u00a0 \u201cPlanners expected that when completed the \u2026 bridge would set a world record for long-span bridges of all types\u201d [3; p. 175].<\/p>\n<p>If you find that you have to incorporate a lot of square brackets and ellipses to make the quotation work, you might be better of simply paraphrasing instead of trying to quote.<\/p>\n<h2>Paraphrasing and Summarizing<\/h2>\n<p>Instead of using direct quotations, which can become cumbersome, you can paraphrase and summarize evidence to integrate it into your argument more concisely. Both paraphrase and summary requires you to read the source carefully, understand it, and then rewrite the idea in your own words to avoid \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.merriam-webster.com\/wordplay\/words-were-watching-patchwriting\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">patchwriting<\/a>.\u201d Using these forms of integration demonstrates your understanding of the source, because rephrasing requires a good grasp of the core ideas. Paraphrasing and summarizing also makes integrating someone else\u2019s ideas into your own sentences and paragraphs a little easier, as you do not have to merge their grammar and writing style with your own.<\/p>\n<p>Paraphrase and summary differ in that paraphrases focuses on a smaller, specific section of text that when paraphrased may be close to the length of the original. For example, you might paraphrase a concluding portion of the Petroski excerpt above like this:<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<p>At the end of its construction, the large cantilever bridge cost $25 million, but the cost in lives lost far exceeded the prediction of one death for each million spent. While planers hoped that the bridge would set a global record, in fact, its claim to fame was much more grim [3].<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>Summaries, on the other hand, are condensations of large chunks of text, so they are much shorter than the original and capture only the main ideas. A summary of the above excerpt might look like this:<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<p>According to Petroski, a large bridge built in Quebec during the early part of the twentieth century claimed the lives of dozens of workers during its construction. The collapse of the bridge early in its construction represented a pivotal design failure for Canadian engineers that shaped the profession [3].<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--examples\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">What is Patchwriting?<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p>&#8220;When a writer takes sentences from the original document and substitutes synonyms for some words, changes the order of others, and maybe reworks a few phrases, this person isn\u2019t creating a successful summary. <strong>Instead, this way of replicating features of the original text too closely is called patch-writing.<\/strong> Even when the source is cited, patch-writing is usually considered plagiarism because the writer is implying they reworked the original text more than they did.&#8221; (Humphreys and Kelly, <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/chapter\/common-sub-genres-of-academic-writing-or-what-youll-be-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Why Write<\/a>)<\/p>\n<p>Compare the original quote from the Petroski excerpt with the example of patchwriting beside it:<\/p>\n<table class=\"grid landscape\" style=\"border-collapse: collapse;width: 100%\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 50%;text-align: center\"><strong>Original quote<\/strong><\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 50%;text-align: center\"><strong>Patch-writing<\/strong><\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">&#8220;Planners expected that when completed, the 1,800-foot main span of the cantilever bridge would set a world record for long-span bridges of all types, many of which had come to be realized at a great price. According to one superstition, a bridge would claim one life for every million dollars spent on it. In fact, by the time the Quebec Bridge would finally be completed, in 1917, almost ninety construction workers would have been killed in the course of building the $25 million structure\u201d [3].<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Designers predicted that when it was done, the main span of the cantilever bridge would set a world record for all types of long-span bridges, many of which had been very costly. One superstition predicted that a bridge would take one life for every million dollars it cost. By the time the Quebec Bridge was completed, in 1917, almost ninety construction workers had been killed in process of constructing the $25 dollar bridge [3].<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h1>Using Signal Phrases<\/h1>\n<p><span style=\"color: black\">Verbs like <i>says, writes, talks about,<\/i> or <i>discusses<\/i> tend to be over-used to signal a quotation and are vague in that they do not provide much information about the <em>rhetorical purpose<\/em>\u00a0of the author. Consider using more rhetorically descriptive verbs when signalling that you are integrating the words or ideas of a source. For example, is the author <i>explaining<\/i> something? <i>Arguing<\/i> a point? <em>Providing examples<\/em>? <em>Estimating<\/em>? <em>Recommending<\/em>? <em>Warning<\/em> or <em>urging<\/em> the reader? Choose a verb that accurately represents the author\u2019s intent. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: black\">The list of signal verbs below offers suggestions for introducing quoted, paraphrased, and summarized material that convey more information about the rhetorical &#8220;move&#8221; the author is making than verbs like \u201csays\u201d or \u201cwrites\u201d or \u201cdiscusses.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<table class=\"grid\" style=\"border-collapse: collapse;width: 100%\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author makes a claim<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author recommends<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author disagrees or questions<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author agrees<\/th>\n<th class=\"shaded\" style=\"width: 16.6667%\">The author shows<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">argues<br \/>\nasserts<br \/>\nbelieves<br \/>\nclaims<br \/>\nemphasizes<br \/>\ninsists<br \/>\nsuggests<br \/>\nhypothesizes<br \/>\nmaintains<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">advocates for<br \/>\nproposes<br \/>\ncalls for<br \/>\ndemands<br \/>\nencourages<br \/>\nimplores<br \/>\npleads<br \/>\nrecommends<br \/>\nurges<br \/>\nwarns<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">challenges<br \/>\ncomplicates<br \/>\ncriticizes<br \/>\nqualifies<br \/>\ncounters<br \/>\ncontradicts<br \/>\nrefutes<br \/>\nrejects<br \/>\ndenies<br \/>\nquestions<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">admires<br \/>\nendorses<br \/>\nsupports<br \/>\naffirms<br \/>\ncorroborates<br \/>\nverifies<br \/>\nreaffirms<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 16.6667%;vertical-align: top\">illustrates<br \/>\nconveys<br \/>\nreveals<br \/>\ndemonstrates<br \/>\npoints out<br \/>\nexemplifies<br \/>\nindicates<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<hr class=\"before-footnotes clear\" \/><div class=\"footnotes\"><ol><li id=\"footnote-386-1\">D. 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