{"id":33,"date":"2020-05-25T16:15:20","date_gmt":"2020-05-25T20:15:20","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/chapter\/feedback-nobody-writes-alone\/"},"modified":"2023-09-28T13:53:47","modified_gmt":"2023-09-28T17:53:47","slug":"feedback-nobody-writes-alone","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/chapter\/feedback-nobody-writes-alone\/","title":{"raw":"1.7 Feedback: No One Writes Alone","rendered":"1.7 Feedback: No One Writes Alone"},"content":{"raw":"Writing can be easier when you get help from others. Your course instructor may include a \u201cpeer review\u201d activity in your classes. To improve your writing (and to help others improve), you may wish to seek feedback on both your writing process and what you are ready to submit to your instructors.\r\n\r\nWhen we write, we may actually forget our reader. We write from inside our heads and know exactly what we mean. However, when others read our writing, they may find there are gaps in content. They may not be able to follow the logic or order of the ideas. They are not \u201cinside\u201d so may be missing the critical information that lends meaning to the text. Now what? Peer review to the rescue!\r\n\r\nWhen we receive feedback from course instructors, teaching assistants, writing centre staff or peers, we become aware of what we are missing in our writing and can respond.\r\n\r\nPlease do watch this handy <a href=\"https:\/\/youtu.be\/tY8CX0J3ILc\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">video about the peer review process and what it looks like to give effective feedback<\/a> (the video is called \u201cNo One Writes Alone\u201d and it provided the inspiration for the title of this section).[footnote]\u201cNo One Writes Alone: Peer Review in the Classroom \u2013 A Guide For Students,\u201d MIT Comparative Media Studies\/Writing, January 31, 2017, video, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=tY8CX0J3ILc\">https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=tY8CX0J3ILc<\/a>.[\/footnote] You\u2019ll note that <a href=\"https:\/\/cmsw.mit.edu\/profile\/suzanne-lane\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Suzanne Lane, the Associate Director of Writing at MIT<\/a>, gives excellent advice we can all benefit from: <strong>be sure you review your peer\u2019s work from a reader\u2019s perspective<\/strong>. You are giving the writer your experience as a reader and that\u2019s invaluable.\r\n\r\n&nbsp;\r\n\r\n[embed]https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/tY8CX0J3ILc[\/embed]\r\n<h2>What kind of feedback should you ask for?<\/h2>\r\nYou may have received a grading rubric or checklist which clarifies your course instructor\u2019s expectations. You may see these expectations grouped in possible categories such as organization, content, sentences\/grammar, and format. Each category may include specific criteria (e.g., \u201cstrong thesis statement\u201d or \u201cargument clarity\u201d) with accompanying marks for fulfilling this criteria.\r\n\r\nDo you have an assignment that requires writing? Maybe take it out now and see if you can find the rubric or how your writing will be marked. <strong>You could ask for feedback in areas included on the rubric\/checklist<\/strong>, focusing on particular points that you feel unsure about. You might also ask for input on an area you\u2019ve had feedback on before, if you\u2019d like to know whether you\u2019re improving.\r\n\r\nSometimes receiving feedback is hard. You may feel hurt by what you hear. Remembering that feedback is a gift helps reduce that sting. Respond to feedback by thanking the person who gave it to you and carefully listening to (or reading) the advice. You may wish to ask questions for clarification so that you are sure you understand what you might do to improve. You may also wish to ignore the feedback if it does not make sense or departs from your course instructor\u2019s expectations. As the writer, you are in the driver\u2019s seat and can choose whether or not to implement the suggestions you receive.\r\n<h2>How should you offer feedback?<\/h2>\r\nIn offering feedback, your goal is to help your peer improve. To help your peer, you need to deliver your feedback in a way that your peer will hear.\r\n\r\n<strong>First<\/strong>, you want to emphasize what is working well in your peer\u2019s writing using scripts like these: \u201cI really like the interesting anecdote you include in your introduction\u201d or \u201cYour sentences are easy to understand.\u201d\r\n\r\n<strong>Second<\/strong>, you can highlight opportunities for growth. You may want to try asking questions:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>\u201cAre you sure that \u2018contemptation\u2019 is a word?\u201d or \u201cWhat do you mean when you say, \u2018the be all is sublime\u2019?\u201d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>You can offer suggestions from your writing experience: \u201cWhen I find one of my paragraphs is going on for several pages, I consider breaking it down into shorter paragraphs.\u201d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>You can speak to your experience reading the text: \u201cI am getting sleepy as I read your middle section. I\u2019m having trouble following your main point.\u201d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Finally, you can point your peer to resources you\u2019ve found helpful: \u201cWhen I need help with writing paragraphs, I look at what our instructor\u2019s posted on the CS site. I also use the Purdue Online Writing Lab\u201d (visit the OWL\u2019s page \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">On Paragraphs<\/a>\u201d[footnote]\u201cOn Paragraphs,\u201d Online Writing Lab, Purdue University, <a style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\" href=\"https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html\">https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html<\/a><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">.<\/span>\r\n[\/footnote]). Hearing about the resources you\u2019re using might inspire your peer to check them out.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\nReading others\u2019 writing opens our eyes to our own strengths and challenges as writers. When we read our peer\u2019s writing and find gaps between ideas, we are reminded of our own need to ensure that connections are clear. Struggling to locate key points in long, repetitious sentences shows us the need to write clear sentences in plain language. Scrutinizing facts our peers share and wondering about sources highlights the importance of citing sources. Reading the writing of others is a window to improving our processes and products.\r\n<h2>Getting feedback from Writing Centre staff<\/h2>\r\nYou can get feedback on your writing and access helpful resources when you visit your university's writing centre. Most universities provide academic writing support for students through writing centres, which may be located in libraries, in departments, or in centres dedicated to student academic success. Please go to the <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/back-matter\/appendix\/\">Resources<\/a> section for information about the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.uvic.ca\/learningandteaching\/cac\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Centre for Academic Communication<\/a>.\r\n\r\nSee your writing course and writing centre as communities that YOU belong to.\r\n\r\nWriting is complex work, and the best writers rely on others for constructive feedback. Seeking feedback on your writing through peer review, course instructor comments, and writing centre appointments draws you into a community of writing practice. Think of writing as a craft, something that is learned over time, an activity that has no ceiling on its performance.","rendered":"<p>Writing can be easier when you get help from others. Your course instructor may include a \u201cpeer review\u201d activity in your classes. To improve your writing (and to help others improve), you may wish to seek feedback on both your writing process and what you are ready to submit to your instructors.<\/p>\n<p>When we write, we may actually forget our reader. We write from inside our heads and know exactly what we mean. However, when others read our writing, they may find there are gaps in content. They may not be able to follow the logic or order of the ideas. They are not \u201cinside\u201d so may be missing the critical information that lends meaning to the text. Now what? Peer review to the rescue!<\/p>\n<p>When we receive feedback from course instructors, teaching assistants, writing centre staff or peers, we become aware of what we are missing in our writing and can respond.<\/p>\n<p>Please do watch this handy <a href=\"https:\/\/youtu.be\/tY8CX0J3ILc\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">video about the peer review process and what it looks like to give effective feedback<\/a> (the video is called \u201cNo One Writes Alone\u201d and it provided the inspiration for the title of this section).<a class=\"footnote\" title=\"\u201cNo One Writes Alone: Peer Review in the Classroom \u2013 A Guide For Students,\u201d MIT Comparative Media Studies\/Writing, January 31, 2017, video, https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=tY8CX0J3ILc.\" id=\"return-footnote-33-1\" href=\"#footnote-33-1\" aria-label=\"Footnote 1\"><sup class=\"footnote\">[1]<\/sup><\/a> You\u2019ll note that <a href=\"https:\/\/cmsw.mit.edu\/profile\/suzanne-lane\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Suzanne Lane, the Associate Director of Writing at MIT<\/a>, gives excellent advice we can all benefit from: <strong>be sure you review your peer\u2019s work from a reader\u2019s perspective<\/strong>. You are giving the writer your experience as a reader and that\u2019s invaluable.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" id=\"oembed-1\" title=\"No One Writes Alone: Peer Review in the Classroom - A Guide For Students\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/tY8CX0J3ILc?feature=oembed&#38;rel=0\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<h2>What kind of feedback should you ask for?<\/h2>\n<p>You may have received a grading rubric or checklist which clarifies your course instructor\u2019s expectations. You may see these expectations grouped in possible categories such as organization, content, sentences\/grammar, and format. Each category may include specific criteria (e.g., \u201cstrong thesis statement\u201d or \u201cargument clarity\u201d) with accompanying marks for fulfilling this criteria.<\/p>\n<p>Do you have an assignment that requires writing? Maybe take it out now and see if you can find the rubric or how your writing will be marked. <strong>You could ask for feedback in areas included on the rubric\/checklist<\/strong>, focusing on particular points that you feel unsure about. You might also ask for input on an area you\u2019ve had feedback on before, if you\u2019d like to know whether you\u2019re improving.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes receiving feedback is hard. You may feel hurt by what you hear. Remembering that feedback is a gift helps reduce that sting. Respond to feedback by thanking the person who gave it to you and carefully listening to (or reading) the advice. You may wish to ask questions for clarification so that you are sure you understand what you might do to improve. You may also wish to ignore the feedback if it does not make sense or departs from your course instructor\u2019s expectations. As the writer, you are in the driver\u2019s seat and can choose whether or not to implement the suggestions you receive.<\/p>\n<h2>How should you offer feedback?<\/h2>\n<p>In offering feedback, your goal is to help your peer improve. To help your peer, you need to deliver your feedback in a way that your peer will hear.<\/p>\n<p><strong>First<\/strong>, you want to emphasize what is working well in your peer\u2019s writing using scripts like these: \u201cI really like the interesting anecdote you include in your introduction\u201d or \u201cYour sentences are easy to understand.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><strong>Second<\/strong>, you can highlight opportunities for growth. You may want to try asking questions:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u201cAre you sure that \u2018contemptation\u2019 is a word?\u201d or \u201cWhat do you mean when you say, \u2018the be all is sublime\u2019?\u201d<\/li>\n<li>You can offer suggestions from your writing experience: \u201cWhen I find one of my paragraphs is going on for several pages, I consider breaking it down into shorter paragraphs.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>You can speak to your experience reading the text: \u201cI am getting sleepy as I read your middle section. I\u2019m having trouble following your main point.\u201d<\/li>\n<li>Finally, you can point your peer to resources you\u2019ve found helpful: \u201cWhen I need help with writing paragraphs, I look at what our instructor\u2019s posted on the CS site. I also use the Purdue Online Writing Lab\u201d (visit the OWL\u2019s page \u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">On Paragraphs<\/a>\u201d<a class=\"footnote\" title=\"\u201cOn Paragraphs,\u201d Online Writing Lab, Purdue University, https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html.\" id=\"return-footnote-33-2\" href=\"#footnote-33-2\" aria-label=\"Footnote 2\"><sup class=\"footnote\">[2]<\/sup><\/a>). Hearing about the resources you\u2019re using might inspire your peer to check them out.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Reading others\u2019 writing opens our eyes to our own strengths and challenges as writers. When we read our peer\u2019s writing and find gaps between ideas, we are reminded of our own need to ensure that connections are clear. Struggling to locate key points in long, repetitious sentences shows us the need to write clear sentences in plain language. Scrutinizing facts our peers share and wondering about sources highlights the importance of citing sources. Reading the writing of others is a window to improving our processes and products.<\/p>\n<h2>Getting feedback from Writing Centre staff<\/h2>\n<p>You can get feedback on your writing and access helpful resources when you visit your university&#8217;s writing centre. Most universities provide academic writing support for students through writing centres, which may be located in libraries, in departments, or in centres dedicated to student academic success. Please go to the <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/back-matter\/appendix\/\">Resources<\/a> section for information about the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.uvic.ca\/learningandteaching\/cac\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Centre for Academic Communication<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>See your writing course and writing centre as communities that YOU belong to.<\/p>\n<p>Writing is complex work, and the best writers rely on others for constructive feedback. Seeking feedback on your writing through peer review, course instructor comments, and writing centre appointments draws you into a community of writing practice. Think of writing as a craft, something that is learned over time, an activity that has no ceiling on its performance.<\/p>\n<hr class=\"before-footnotes clear\" \/><div class=\"footnotes\"><ol><li id=\"footnote-33-1\">\u201cNo One Writes Alone: Peer Review in the Classroom \u2013 A Guide For Students,\u201d MIT Comparative Media Studies\/Writing, January 31, 2017, video, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=tY8CX0J3ILc\">https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=tY8CX0J3ILc<\/a>. <a href=\"#return-footnote-33-1\" class=\"return-footnote\" aria-label=\"Return to footnote 1\">&crarr;<\/a><\/li><li id=\"footnote-33-2\">\u201cOn Paragraphs,\u201d Online Writing Lab, Purdue University, <a style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\" href=\"https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html\">https:\/\/owl.purdue.edu\/owl\/general_writing\/academic_writing\/paragraphs_and_paragraphing\/index.html<\/a><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">.<\/span>\r\n <a href=\"#return-footnote-33-2\" class=\"return-footnote\" aria-label=\"Return to footnote 2\">&crarr;<\/a><\/li><\/ol><\/div>","protected":false},"author":103,"menu_order":7,"template":"","meta":{"pb_show_title":"on","pb_short_title":"","pb_subtitle":"","pb_authors":["nancy-ami","natalie-boldt","sara-humphreys","erin-kelly"],"pb_section_license":""},"chapter-type":[50],"contributor":[62,63,64,61],"license":[],"class_list":["post-33","chapter","type-chapter","status-publish","hentry","chapter-type-numberless","contributor-erin-kelly","contributor-nancy-ami","contributor-natalie-boldt","contributor-sara-humphreys"],"part":20,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/33","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/chapter"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/103"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/33\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":484,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/33\/revisions\/484"}],"part":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/20"}],"metadata":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapters\/33\/metadata\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=33"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"chapter-type","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/chapter-type?post=33"},{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=33"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/whywriteguide2e\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=33"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}