{"id":116,"date":"2022-01-31T12:58:10","date_gmt":"2022-01-31T17:58:10","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/?post_type=part&#038;p=116"},"modified":"2023-11-30T11:31:57","modified_gmt":"2023-11-30T16:31:57","slug":"process-craft-revision-and-editing","status":"publish","type":"part","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/part\/process-craft-revision-and-editing\/","title":{"raw":"Chapter 11: Revision and Editing","rendered":"Chapter 11: Revision and Editing"},"content":{"raw":"<a class=\"internal\" href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web.jpg\"><img class=\"chapterimage aligncenter wp-image-1214 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web.jpg\" alt=\"Illustration of a tall narrow lush mountain surrounded by clouds, with a few red roofed houses at the base and a few people at the summit looking to the right, with one person pointing. All have scarves blowing in the wind to the left. \" width=\"1780\" height=\"2492\" \/><\/a>\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--learning-objectives\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Student Learning Goals<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n\r\nIn this chapter, you will:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400\">Apply effective techniques of editing and proofreading<\/li>\r\n \t<li style=\"font-weight: 400\">Revise writing for style and tone<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n&nbsp;","rendered":"<p><a class=\"internal\" href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"chapterimage aligncenter wp-image-1214 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web.jpg\" alt=\"Illustration of a tall narrow lush mountain surrounded by clouds, with a few red roofed houses at the base and a few people at the summit looking to the right, with one person pointing. All have scarves blowing in the wind to the left.\" width=\"1780\" height=\"2492\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web.jpg 1780w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-214x300.jpg 214w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-731x1024.jpg 731w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-768x1075.jpg 768w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-1097x1536.jpg 1097w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-1463x2048.jpg 1463w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-65x91.jpg 65w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-225x315.jpg 225w, https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1608\/2022\/01\/Steve-McCarthy-for-Fine-Acts_web-350x490.jpg 350w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1780px) 100vw, 1780px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--learning-objectives\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Student Learning Goals<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p>In this chapter, you will:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\">Apply effective techniques of editing and proofreading<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400\">Revise writing for style and tone<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div class=\"media-attributions clear\" prefix:cc=\"http:\/\/creativecommons.org\/ns#\" prefix:dc=\"http:\/\/purl.org\/dc\/terms\/\"><h2>Media Attributions<\/h2><ul><li about=\"https:\/\/www.thegreats.co\/artworks\/together-we-can-move-mountains\"><a rel=\"cc:attributionURL\" href=\"https:\/\/www.thegreats.co\/artworks\/together-we-can-move-mountains\" property=\"dc:title\">Together We Can Move Mountains<\/a>  &copy;  <a rel=\"dc:creator\" href=\"https:\/\/www.thegreats.co\/artists\/steve-mccarthy\" property=\"cc:attributionName\">Steve McCarthy<\/a>  adapted by  Angie Goertz  is licensed under a  <a rel=\"license\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-nc-sa\/4.0\/\">CC BY-NC-SA (Attribution NonCommercial ShareAlike)<\/a> license<\/li><\/ul><\/div>","protected":false},"parent":0,"menu_order":11,"template":"","meta":{"pb_part_invisible":false,"pb_part_invisible_string":""},"contributor":[],"license":[],"class_list":["post-116","part","type-part","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/116","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/part"}],"version-history":[{"count":10,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/116\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2141,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/pressbooks\/v2\/parts\/116\/revisions\/2141"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=116"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"contributor","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/contributor?post=116"},{"taxonomy":"license","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pressbooks.bccampus.ca\/writingplace\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/license?post=116"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}